[ Opowieście z Karkonoszy ] I refreshed another Karkonosze legend

Hi,

After the quite nice reception of the previous one post I wrote another story based on the Karkonosze legends. I’m curious about your opinion. How do you read it? What is worth improving? Or maybe abandon the idea altogether?

Link: https://www.wattpad.com/1582553295-opowie%C5%9Bci-z-karkonoszy-kawalerski-pod-%C5%9Bnie%C5%BCk%C4%85

I also posted everything on Wattpad so as not to overwhelm you with a wall of text. If anyone knows a better platform, I’ll be happy to use it :’)